Haiku: three line poem, with each line having 5, 7 and 5 syllables respectively. must give reader clear image through the words. No Rhyming.

Here's mine.......

the momentum builds
buzzing madly as she spins
towards nine thousand



....now get to work b8tches and add to the list

 

Foot on the pedal
Seeing red then blue
oh, its another ticket...
..LOL.. Sorry

 

Kenny Bania "...thats gold Jerry, gold!!!!"

 

the onset of fall
car moves with a bit more zoom
the cold air is great

real haikus have to mention a season..

 

supercharger whines
Pettit Racing adds some zoom
the sound makes me smile

 

2nd line needs to be 7... adjusted for you

Foot on the pedal
flashing of red and blue lights
another ticket

mine

reving the engine
the baffling exhaust pipes
listen how she purrs

or

flying through a bend
watch the beauty grip each turn
then gone, zoom zoom zoom

 

I think their next concept car should be called the HAIKU!

 

a car made one time
one hundred grand of beauty
only on display

 

Cheap used RX-8s
Spawn moronic newby posts
It makes this site suck

 

don't touch the car kid
or I'll kick your skinny ***
left him in the dust

 

Handles like a dream
Mazda forgot to add grunt
So they fall behind

 

trochoid in my dreams
renesis all too stroke love
red velocity

winter will break-in
nine thousand climax

 

A sweep of the tach
Leaves the devil in dust
Redline to heaven.

 

Haikus are easy
Just know how to count okay
And you will be fine