FD and 8 Battle. (illustrator)
To me it seems like that 8 and the FD are turing on a corner with drastic changes in camber. The 8 looks like it's on an extreme negatiive camber corner and the FD looks like it's on a neutral camber corner.
not bad, but you've got a lot to learn ahead of you.
use the pen when you can. youll have much cleaner lines.
pencil is difficult to use with a mouse, which im guessing that you did. most of the edges look very rough.
both your line shading and tire marks have no sense of distance... as in, the thickness of the line stays the same throughout the line. makes it look awkward.
but im no art major so take this with a grain of salt.
use the pen when you can. youll have much cleaner lines.
pencil is difficult to use with a mouse, which im guessing that you did. most of the edges look very rough.
both your line shading and tire marks have no sense of distance... as in, the thickness of the line stays the same throughout the line. makes it look awkward.
but im no art major so take this with a grain of salt.
Last edited by cjkim; Dec 18, 2008 at 01:59 AM.
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