My rx8 Poem
03-04-2008, 05:04 PM
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My rx8 Poem
Please give me your feedback, and any ideas. This poem has to be abot 150 words long, it's only 118 right now! HAALP!
Rotor Head
My idea of a symphony;
Two rotors playing the tune my right foot tells them too.
They spin with swift might,
And fill feeble pistons with panicking fright.
When I stop at the red light,
I rev my engine to it utmost height.
The light turns green,
My wheels begin to uncontrollably scream.
The screeching music fills my ears as we slip,
My heart pounds, as my tires are looking for grip.
The endless power of my Wankel can be heard from afar,
People hear it and gaze out the windows of their car.
Testosterone on wheels,
Wheels which hold up an engine with apex seals.
No symphony sounds as great,
As the one played by my RX-8.
- Dshiznit1489
if you steal my poem, i will kill you.
that is all.
Rotor Head
My idea of a symphony;
Two rotors playing the tune my right foot tells them too.
They spin with swift might,
And fill feeble pistons with panicking fright.
When I stop at the red light,
I rev my engine to it utmost height.
The light turns green,
My wheels begin to uncontrollably scream.
The screeching music fills my ears as we slip,
My heart pounds, as my tires are looking for grip.
The endless power of my Wankel can be heard from afar,
People hear it and gaze out the windows of their car.
Testosterone on wheels,
Wheels which hold up an engine with apex seals.
No symphony sounds as great,
As the one played by my RX-8.
- Dshiznit1489
if you steal my poem, i will kill you.
that is all.
03-04-2008, 05:39 PM
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you need to put something in there about either:
- you've heard rumors that these cars can flood
but not your car, because your car is a Stud.
OR
who would have thought I'd have a piece of heaven
and not even have to buy a Mazda RX-7.
I don't know; just stuff off the top ofmy head.
- you've heard rumors that these cars can flood
but not your car, because your car is a Stud.
OR
who would have thought I'd have a piece of heaven
and not even have to buy a Mazda RX-7.
I don't know; just stuff off the top ofmy head.
03-04-2008, 05:56 PM
#6
Huge hole is huge
you need to put something in there about either:
- you've heard rumors that these cars can flood
but not your car, because your car is a Stud.
OR
who would have thought I'd have a piece of heaven
and not even have to buy a Mazda RX-7.
I don't know; just stuff off the top ofmy head.
- you've heard rumors that these cars can flood
but not your car, because your car is a Stud.
OR
who would have thought I'd have a piece of heaven
and not even have to buy a Mazda RX-7.
I don't know; just stuff off the top ofmy head.
03-04-2008, 05:58 PM
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Permission granted
03-05-2008, 12:20 PM
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shiznit: update on poem?
03-05-2008, 10:51 PM
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I don't buy Kool-Aid
Please give me your feedback, and any ideas. This poem has to be abot 150 words long, it's only 118 right now! HAALP!
Rotor Head
My idea of a symphony;
Two rotors playing the tune my right foot tells them too.
They spin with swift might,
And fill feeble pistons with panicking fright.
When I stop at the red light,
I rev my engine to it utmost height.
The light turns green,
My wheels begin to uncontrollably scream.
The screeching music fills my ears as we slip,
My heart pounds, as my tires are looking for grip.
The endless power of my Wankel can be heard from afar,
People hear it and gaze out the windows of their car.
Testosterone on wheels,
Wheels which hold up an engine with apex seals.
No symphony sounds as great,
As the one played by my RX-8.
- Dshiznit1489
if you steal my poem, i will kill you.
that is all.
Rotor Head
My idea of a symphony;
Two rotors playing the tune my right foot tells them too.
They spin with swift might,
And fill feeble pistons with panicking fright.
When I stop at the red light,
I rev my engine to it utmost height.
The light turns green,
My wheels begin to uncontrollably scream.
The screeching music fills my ears as we slip,
My heart pounds, as my tires are looking for grip.
The endless power of my Wankel can be heard from afar,
People hear it and gaze out the windows of their car.
Testosterone on wheels,
Wheels which hold up an engine with apex seals.
No symphony sounds as great,
As the one played by my RX-8.
- Dshiznit1489
if you steal my poem, i will kill you.
that is all.
To be, or not to be? that is the next RX-7
05-06-2008, 05:55 PM
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05-06-2008, 06:03 PM
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chalk up another point for the good guys.
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